Thursday, June 11, 2009

Shadows - Dancing In The Dark

Artist: Shadows
Album: Dancing In The Dark
Shadows Dancing In The Dark
Tracklist :
  • Dancing In The Dark
  • Life In The Jungle
  • Queen Of Hearts
  • Cat 'N' Mouse
  • I Will Return
  • Shoba
  • No Dancing
  • High Noon
  • Telstar
  • More Than I Can Say
  • Outdigo
  • Spot The Ball
  • Time Is Tight
  • Elevenis
  • Mountains Of The Moon
  • A Whiter Shade Of Pale

help with my writing...?

i wrote this a few minutes ago and i want to know if it sounds interesting. i know it's not much and it doesn't reveal much about the story but if you could help, i am open to any constructive criticism you can give me... about anything at all.


All my life I had seen this sort of ‘inner struggle’ in many of the people and things around me. It seems as though there is anger in everything and everyone. It seems as though the world is angry.

Storms have been known to represent a certain growing rage. Even calm has been known to foreshadow dangerous, foreboding future events. Wind is nothing more than a push of strength and ferocity. The sun may be kind, but the sun can always be expected to be replaced by the cold, lifeless moon. The moon symbolizes the beginning of night. Night is dark. Dark are the shadows of the world’s secrets and deception.

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